I had been visiting the Pancada Grande waterfall, when my friends told me about Boipeba Island. I was courious to know the place. So i and my son, changed our plan and in the next morining we went to Boipeba. it was 8:00 A.M. i had been draving to fishing village called Torrinhas. When we arrived there, i rented a motorboat to take us to Boipeba. We had been walking on the motorboat, when i decided stop to lunch on the floating restaurant in Gamboa's beach. After lunch we were just resting, when the rain started. While it was the rain, we were swiming in the beach. The rain had stoped, when we watching a stunning sunset.
In your first sentence better saying: "I was visiting..." than "I had been visting". It makes more sense.
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line 4: I had been driving to a fishing village,,, not draving Line 5: we were riding the motorboat...not walking on Line 6 : stop for lunch Line 7: While it was raining Line 8: the rain had stopped when we watched ...
Exercise 9 page18 unit II -Write a paragraph about a relationship that is important to you. How did you meet? What were you doing when you met? Describe some events in the relationship. Use the simple past and past progressive:
I met my fiancée while I was in a big music concert in Salvador. I was in the middle of the crowd with some friend and we were drinking beers. I remember that Jamil band was playing and we crossed our eyes. As gentleman I went to her and tried to talk about her beauty and so on after few minutes the magic happened and we are together since there.
Exercise 11 page 64 unit V - Write a paragraph about your life 10 years from now. What will you be doing for a living? What kind of family life will you have? What hobbies will you enjoying? what will you do to achieve these things? Use the future and future progressive.
10 years from now I will working in a big project maybe abroad maybe here in Brasil and I will be enjoying a total surf life style I will live near to the beach and I will have the chance to surf as much as I decide and I will start my plan to buy a hotel in somewhere which this lifestyle can be lived most intensified. In 10 years I will know a lot beautiful beach which I dream since kid. I will be a men of family with 1 kid and enjoy my free time with he or her. From now to 10 years I will be finished my master degree and maybe think in teach something from my professional experience.
Line 1: I will be working... Line 2: near the beach... not near to the beach Line 3: buy a hotel somewhere where this lifestyle can be lived very intensively. line 5: a lot of beautiful beaches... not beach. which I have dreamt since I was a kid line 5: family man... not a man of family line 6: with him or her Line 7: 10 years from now I will have finished my master's degree and maybe I will be thinking about teaching something...
I was walking to job when i saw my wife for the first time. I knew her friend Ester, so i asked Ester if she could bring her friend Isabela to my birthday party in 1998. I was dancing when i met Isabela. We was dancing for long time when i stole a kiss. Years later, we got married
In 10 years, i'll be working with scuba diving. I'm going to be dipping in the most beautiful wreck of Brazil or another country. I'll have two children and when we will have a freetime, we're going to be dipping together or we'll be doing some aquatic sport. But i need wait my ear heal. Then i'm going to do a scuba diving course. By 2024, i'll be living in Enceadinha do Paraguçu.
Line 1: I'm going to be diving... not dipping Line 2: wrecks not wreck Line 2: When we have freetime Line 3 : diving... instead of dipping Line 3 : water sport not aquatic sport Line 4 : my ear heals Line 4 : I'm going to take a cuba diving course.
In ten years, I will be working for a international and competitive company, with a good economic stability, technologies, co workers with Know-how and also a good relationship between colleagues and a reliable relationship with the external and internal customers. Additionally, I’m going to be the master process manager of the company, working hard to implement projects to control and decrease losses of the production process and costs. And Moreover, my Family and I will be living next of my parents, and if it’s possible, with my two brothers’ Family, and in the vacations we will be traveling around the world and buying a lot. But to realize my dream, first I have to finish my graduate and increasing my habilits.
We say an bedore vowel sounds so in line 1 you should have written " I will be working for an international and ..."
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Line 8 : "next to my parents" instead of "next of" Line 9 : I think you meant " two brothers' families Line 9 : and on our vacation Line 11: finish my graduation Line 11: I don't know what you meant with "increasing my habilits" It didn't make sense to me. Maybe you meant developing my skills...
By the time that you are working to reach your goals some things can happen and change your plans, but, don't worry about that. Just keep your focus on the place that you want to reach and adapt yourself to the new conditions.
I had been visiting the Pancada Grande waterfall, when my friends told me about Boipeba Island. I was courious to know the place. So i and my son, changed our plan and in the next morining we went to Boipeba.
ReplyDeleteit was 8:00 A.M. i had been draving to fishing village called Torrinhas. When we arrived there, i rented a motorboat to take us to Boipeba. We had been walking on the motorboat, when i decided stop to lunch on the floating restaurant in Gamboa's beach. After lunch we were just resting, when the rain started. While it was the rain, we were swiming in the beach. The rain had stoped, when we watching a stunning sunset.
Joao,
DeleteIn your first sentence better saying: "I was visiting..." than "I had been visting". It makes more sense.
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line 4: I had been driving to a fishing village,,, not draving
Line 5: we were riding the motorboat...not walking on
Line 6 : stop for lunch
Line 7: While it was raining
Line 8: the rain had stopped when we watched ...
Exercise 9 page18 unit II -Write a paragraph about a relationship that is important to you. How did you meet? What were you doing when you met? Describe some events in the relationship. Use the simple past and past progressive:
ReplyDeleteI met my fiancée while I was in a big music concert in Salvador. I was in the middle of the crowd with some friend and we were drinking beers.
I remember that Jamil band was playing and we crossed our eyes. As gentleman I went to her and tried to talk about her beauty and so on after few minutes the magic happened and we are together since there.
Vitor,
DeleteI believe that you meant with some "friends" not "some friend" in line 2.
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line 3: As a gentleman...
I would change the punctuation of your last sentence:
(...) her beauty and so on. After a few minutes, the magic happened and we have been together since then.
Exercise 11 page 64 unit V - Write a paragraph about your life 10 years from now. What will you be doing for a living? What kind of family life will you have? What hobbies will you enjoying? what will you do to achieve these things? Use the future and future progressive.
ReplyDelete10 years from now I will working in a big project maybe abroad maybe here in Brasil and I will be enjoying a total surf life style I will live near to the beach and I will have the chance to surf as much as I decide and I will start my plan to buy a hotel in somewhere which this lifestyle can be lived most intensified.
In 10 years I will know a lot beautiful beach which I dream since kid. I will be a men of family with 1 kid and enjoy my free time with he or her.
From now to 10 years I will be finished my master degree and maybe think in teach something from my professional experience.
Vitor,]
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Line 1: I will be working...
Line 2: near the beach... not near to the beach
Line 3: buy a hotel somewhere where this lifestyle can be lived very intensively.
line 5: a lot of beautiful beaches... not beach. which I have dreamt since I was a kid
line 5: family man... not a man of family
line 6: with him or her
Line 7: 10 years from now I will have finished my master's degree and maybe I will be thinking about teaching something...
Homework, page 18, exercise 9.
ReplyDeleteI was walking to job when i saw my wife for the first time. I knew her friend Ester, so i asked Ester if she could bring her friend Isabela to my birthday party in 1998. I was dancing when i met Isabela. We was dancing for long time when i stole a kiss. Years later, we got married
João,
DeleteI would say: "I was walking to work" instead of "I was walking to job..."
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line 3: we were dancing for a long time...
Remember the pronoun I is always written with a capital letter. so it's "I" never "i"
Homework, page 64, exercise 11.
ReplyDeleteIn 10 years, i'll be working with scuba diving. I'm going to be dipping in the most beautiful wreck of Brazil or another country. I'll have two children and when we will have a freetime, we're going to be dipping together or we'll be doing some aquatic sport. But i need wait my ear heal. Then i'm going to do a scuba diving course. By 2024, i'll be living in Enceadinha do Paraguçu.
Capital I in I'll be line 1
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Line 1: I'm going to be diving... not dipping
Line 2: wrecks not wreck
Line 2: When we have freetime
Line 3 : diving... instead of dipping
Line 3 : water sport not aquatic sport
Line 4 : my ear heals
Line 4 : I'm going to take a cuba diving course.
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ReplyDeleteIn ten years, I will be working for a international and competitive company, with a good economic stability, technologies, co workers with Know-how and also a good relationship between colleagues and a reliable relationship with the external and internal customers.
DeleteAdditionally, I’m going to be the master process manager of the company, working hard to implement projects to control and decrease losses of the production process and costs.
And Moreover, my Family and I will be living next of my parents, and if it’s possible, with my two brothers’ Family, and in the vacations we will be traveling around the world and buying a lot. But to realize my dream, first I have to finish my graduate and increasing my habilits.
Mabrisa,
DeleteWe say an bedore vowel sounds so in line 1 you should have written " I will be working for an international and ..."
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Line 8 : "next to my parents" instead of "next of"
Line 9 : I think you meant " two brothers' families
Line 9 : and on our vacation
Line 11: finish my graduation
Line 11: I don't know what you meant with "increasing my habilits" It didn't make sense to me. Maybe you meant developing my skills...
I meant "we say an before..." not "bedore" sorry :)
DeleteBy the time that you are working to reach your goals some things can happen and change your plans, but, don't worry about that. Just keep your focus on the place that you want to reach and adapt yourself to the new conditions.
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